AltarNet Reality
Book 1: Inheriting the Whirlwind
Script

by Robert Paul Breeden

Page 14: Background: S.T.A.R.S. is an acronym for the Strategic Tactical Advanced Reconnaissance Squad, and is a scouting squad for the S.T.R.I.P.E.S., which is the Secondary Tactical Rapid International Peace Enforcement Squad. These two squads form one cohesive and extraordinarily efficient unit that have been keeping the world's supervillain problem at bay for decades.

Panel A:

We see a medium shot of eight heroes again charging toward the camera as the S.T.A.R.S. were in the earlier page.
Emma narrating: AND THEN THE CAVALRY ARRIVED.
In a new narration box, Emma continues narrating: WHERE THE S.T.A.R.S. WOULD CHECK OUT A PROBLEM...
And in a third narration box, Emma narrates: ...THE S.T.R.I.P.E.S. WOULD SOLVE IT.


Panel B:
We see a head shot of S.T.R.I.P.E.S. leader, codenamed Powerhouse. He wears a very heavy duty metallic and purple helmet that also masks his face. Emma narrating: POWERHOUSE. HE'S AN ARMY ALL BY HIMSELF. AND THE S.T.R.I.P.E.S.' FEARLESS, CHEERLESS LEADER.


Panel C:
We see a head shot of S.T.R.I.P.E.S. 2nd-in-command, codenamed Pact. He compacts non-organic materials with a touch. Emma narrating: PACT. HE CRUSHES STUFF. LITERALLY.


Panel D:
Emma narrating: WHERE THE S.T.A.R.S. PLACED THE NAIL...
In a different narration box, Emma continues: ...THE S.T.R.I.P.E.S. BROUGHT DOWN THE HAMMER.


Panel E:
We see a head shot of S.T.R.I.P.E.S. medical officer, codenamed Dr. Blastwave. She can emit walls of kinetic force in short bursts, like a blast wave.
Emma narrating: DR. BLASTWAVE. SHE PUSHES PEOPLE BACK.


Panel F:
Emma narrating: WHERE THE S.T.A.R.S. LAID LOW...
In a different narration box, Emma continues: ...THE S.T.R.I.P.E.S. LAID WASTE.


Panel G:
We see a head shot of S.T.R.I.P.E.S. munitions specialist, codenamed Gunshow. a young handsome Asian-Anglo mixed U. S. Marine. Oorah.
Emma narrating:


Panel H:
We see a head shot of S.T.R.I.P.E.S. missile specialist, codenamed Miss Elle.
Emma narrating:


Panel I:
We see a head shot of S.T.R.I.P.E.S. tech specialist, codenamed Tinker.
Emma narrating:


Panel J:
Emma narrating: AS TERMÍNA SAW THE S.T.R.I.P.E.S. TEAR THROUGH HER RANKS, SHE REALIZED...


Panel K:
We see a head shot of S.T.R.I.P.E.S. earthquake specialist, codenamed Epicenter.
Emma narrating:


Panel L:
We see Termina's face in extreme closeup with a stunned look on her face, action lines all around drawing motion to her face, lending drama and tension.
Emma narrating: ...SHE HAD MISCALCULATED.


Panel M:
We see a head shot of S.T.R.I.P.E.S. tactical coordinator, codenamed Tagteam.
Emma narrating:


Page lays out suggesting an "N" shape, as in "Next wave", roughly like this:

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